This is far better already - I am glad you wanted to change it a bit. I know you haven't got all of the cover lines on yet but you can already see it taking shape.
Some suggestions I have would be to: - add a border (maybe slightly transparent) to the bottom and put the text on that - don't use the pill again on here if you have it on your poster - make 'the world's # 1 ...' stand out more, either add effect or change the colour - add the apostrophe to the 'world's' - take some of the red out of Danni's face and make her stand out more (try adjusting the levels - make Danni a little bigger and move the FMW up a touch - add a price on the barcode - keep using the yellow boxes for the main cover lines
Matt,
ReplyDeleteThis is far better already - I am glad you wanted to change it a bit. I know you haven't got all of the cover lines on yet but you can already see it taking shape.
Some suggestions I have would be to:
- add a border (maybe slightly transparent) to the bottom and put the text on that
- don't use the pill again on here if you have it on your poster
- make 'the world's # 1 ...' stand out more, either add effect or change the colour
- add the apostrophe to the 'world's'
- take some of the red out of Danni's face and make her stand out more (try adjusting the levels
- make Danni a little bigger and move the FMW up a touch
- add a price on the barcode
- keep using the yellow boxes for the main cover lines
Good stuff Matt,
EllieB